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Numero Negative Zilch
Member since February 24, 2012
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Bee Beautiful
Bzzzz Bzzzz Bzzzz what is that I hear...Something"s buzzing near my ear but her name isn't Wanda Let me take another listen as I invision the coast near a sea something tropical... Can this bee a dream maybe not or maybe so.... I think of your face when the weather is cold just so I can remind myself... Warmth is only in your mind...I"m not your type of course I can sea the signs The ocean I flow...unlocking my soul...You don't have to shake my ha nd I already know your real and girl I know you been thru alot then to just let sum Dumb Dude who"s sweet....Lift you off your feet....and try together to find Paradise I"d probably have a better chance trying to roll dice with 50 cent and Shady I'ma Long Shot plus no Crack in my system when I was born....My Dad was a fan of Lee you know the one who produced "Do The Right Thing" Won't say the first name Cause for some that"s a curse and an addiction but if wanting the best for you is wrong I don"t wanna be right....I got some working out to do....To get my frame right Charles S. is still in his flesh for now and Nan Da less you see how smooth that was.... Put it together you know the rest....You Beautiful Blonde Bombshell... Girl your Unstoppable Your always at your best....Matadoress....Cause your eluding the Bull.... Your eyes whip my ass every chime.....and everytime you sneeze.... Let's keep it 100....your alergic to the Bullshit...This is a new flip...Turning channels I'm foolish....Bee Beautiful in everything you do....I don't care if the feeling ain't mutual When I look at you... I sea a work of Art some of the most brilliant Men who walked this earth.... ain"t never live to see...Sweet twards you cause for real you ain't even got to pay me no mind Once a soldier always a soldier....I love your attention....That was over but can you please rock with this poem if you Overstand....C.S. Smooth naw Lady I'm a Tramp without a stamp....I'm amp I don't call it that by the way....I just call it like I sea it...That's a purfectly placed tattoo at the bottom of your spine...Been spitting facts since way back whenever.... It's always clever whenever E put's it together....... Peace & Happy Holidays To you and Yours....Can anybody say FRIEND ZONEDdddddddddddd......... It's cool I'm use to it...How's Pac doing he probably still hanging in there right? LOL
Numero Negative Zilch’s timeline
- February 2022
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24 ThuAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2019
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26 Thu
- December 2017
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19 TueReceived a critique
on Bee Beautiful from @Eumolpus
"To automatic write. Get out ideas. Let it hang. Discover yourself it is the artists sketch pad. It is journal. It is not poetry. Now some might say that poetry has no definition or bs like that But if there are zero bou…" -
19 TuePosted a poem
Bee Beautiful
"Bzzzz Bzzzz Bzzzz what is that I hear...Something"s buzzing near my ear but her name isn't Wanda Let me take another listen as I invision the coast near a sea something tropical... Can this bee a dream maybe not or maybe so.... I think of your face when the weather is cold just so I can remind myself... Warmth is only in your mind...I"m not your type of course I can sea the signs The ocean I flow...unlocking my soul...You don't have to shake my ha nd I already know your real and girl I know you been thru alot then to just let sum Dumb Dude who"s sweet....Lift you off your feet....and try together to find Paradise I"d probably have a better chance trying to roll dice with 50 cent and Shady I'ma Long Shot plus no Crack in my system when I was born....My Dad was a fan of Lee you know the one who produced "Do The Right Thing" Won't say the first name Cause for some that"s a curse and an addiction but if wanting the best for you is wrong I don"t wanna be right....I got some working out to do....To get my frame right Charles S. is still in his flesh for now and Nan Da less you see how smooth that was.... Put it together you know the rest....You Beautiful Blonde Bombshell... Girl your Unstoppable Your always at your best....Matadoress....Cause your eluding the Bull.... Your eyes whip my ass every chime.....and everytime you sneeze.... Let's keep it 100....your alergic to the Bullshit...This is a new flip...Turning channels I'm foolish....Bee Beautiful in everything you do....I don't care if the feeling ain't mutual When I look at you... I sea a work of Art some of the most brilliant Men who walked this earth.... ain"t never live to see...Sweet twards you cause for real you ain't even got to pay me no mind Once a soldier always a soldier....I love your attention....That was over but can you please rock with this poem if you Overstand....C.S. Smooth naw Lady I'm a Tramp without a stamp....I'm amp I don't call it that by the way....I just call it like I sea it...That's a purfectly placed tattoo at the bottom of your spine...Been spitting facts since way back whenever.... It's always clever whenever E put's it together....... Peace & Happy Holidays To you and Yours....Can anybody say FRIEND ZONEDdddddddddddd......... It's cool I'm use to it...How's Pac doing he probably still hanging in there right? LOL" - November 2017
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16 ThuPosted a poem
Everybody can judge except me
"I have no Wright to judge anyone... Man or Woman I have no right because I have no rights My rights were stripped away the first time I lost my sanity I have no right to love or to be loved For me Love is a Myth I have never experienced that emotion cause everytime I think I am close I lose which I thought love was... There is no love for me...Love is death to me and I have yet been pronounced deceased I am a disease that festers in a body which has known only agony and despair It's rare for me to find happiness yet I'm always in pursuit for that which Time and Time again always eludes E or Me or whoever I am Fuck all the pretty Pety shit my name is... Roll Roll Roll ur boat gently on a beam of Light Roll ur Grass in a leaf and roll it tight If you lose more then you smoke Then U ain't smoking it Rightously Obnoxious spiittiinngg Bars ... Til I'm unconscious...I'm the Man muthafucka I'm the Man You ain't a fan well soon enough you'll understand...never under I'm In a Rover with windows that don't Rol or am I in a Maybac with doors that don't close Expose myself to a Woman ina room without windows never I'm doing good it can't get no better" - October 2017
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28 SatCritiqued
"Escape" by @lonlyhrtsclub13
"Went to church yesterday and end up in a mental institute today...the Lord is as amazing as 0 You may see Zero yet I see a hero and the meaning of life is to live to the fullest Only need one Drag off the cig...don't pu…" - March 2017
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14 TueReceived a critique
on Rolwright from @swamp-witch
"Interesting pastiche! I can definitely hear this performed as spoken-word or rap. I am really interested when things like nursery rhymes or other things deemed innocent and child-like are transformed into adult things…" - February 2017
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24 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2014
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07 SunPosted a poem
Rolwright
"Roll Roll Roll this flow gently down a beat Merrily merrily merrily merrily Life ain't what it seems" -
07 SunPosted a poem
Rolwright
"Roll Roll Roll this flow gently down a beat Merrily merrily merrily merrily Life ain't what it seems" -
06 SatReceived a critique
on The Sun of God from @wesley snow
"The work as it stands is poetry. It has a consistent line length, a moderately even meter and a powerful, even controversial subject. What it lacks is clarity. If a poem is not understood its audience shrinks. You menti…" -
05 FriReceived a critique
on Missing Messiah from @wesley snow
"It's certainly not my sort of poetry, but that's a cop out for not giving the poem its due. Much of it is confusing to me. I read it several times and pieced together some of it that I had missed, but I am still lost in…" -
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03 Wed
- February 2013
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24 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2012
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09 SunReceived a critique
on Thoughts (Simple and Plain) from @weirdelf
"I almost agree with his re-writing, but I really enjoyed this poem. It has a certain naivety and honesty." -
05 WedReceived a critique
on Thoughts (Simple and Plain) from @Race_9togo
"I took the liberty of doing something that I almost never do, editing someone else's poem. I did this because when I read your poem, I thought "Well, THIS makes no sense." Then I spoke it, and it became much, much clear…" -
05 Wed
- November 2012
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11 SunReceived a critique
on Nothing better to do - So I'll do this from @Ian.T
"The same as the other poems you have streamed they are so hard to read as it all mashes into a blob, could you have a go at editing so that I can return and read properly, Yours Ian.T" -
03 SatPosted a poem
Nothing better to do - So I'll do this
"Remembering times seem often harder to recollect" - October 2012
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26 FriPosted a poem
Right place but maybe not the right time
"I've been in a mood lately but right now I'm figuring why not" -
21 Sun
- August 2012
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02 ThuCritiqued
"Love is a lover" by @romantic_bohemian
"I'm a hopeless romantic myself so I can understand how elusive true love can actually be.I hope you find what your looking for and if you've found it already hold on to it.I'll also say please don't smother it because e…" -
02 ThuPosted a poem
In the Land of Frowns
"Nobody smiles where I'm from and I don't know why.I'm not from a Third World country, I'm actually from North East Baltimore.There's alot of crime though I've never been a criminal, alright it's that one time.I stole the cookies out the cookie jar, who me , yeah you , couldn't be then who?The crumbs were that which gave me away.I thought it was the one's in my pockect but actually it was the one's I forgot to wipe away from my face.Grandma asked "Are you sure?" ,then I gave up and told her it was me.She smacked my hands with a thin broomstick til they turned red.I then told her I had to use the restroom, before I could open the door I wet myself a little.Soooooooo..........I told my friends this on the stoop before they bursted into laughter.One friend told me he was about to bust a lung from laughing so hard.The D-Boys heard the commotion from the corner and told us to shut the fuck up because we were making the block hot.We did, the reason being.......Nobody smiles where I'm from............ Except me and my friends after I tell embarrasing stories about myself." - July 2012
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31 TueNew follower
@Ian.T
- June 2012
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28 ThuPosted a poem
Thought Vs. Doubt
"Thoughts are collasal higher then skyscrappers more like sky chasers" -
13 WedCritiqued
"Death by uselessness." by @weirdelf
"The more I read the more I found an appreciation of what this piece meant from my stand point.I rant alot in my poetry but the truth behind the statements you were making were real insightful.This was the first time I'v…" -
13 WedFirst critique offered
on "Death by uselessness." by @weirdelf
- February 2012
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24 FriFirst publication
Improv
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24 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Single ? Inspiring Hip Hop Artist ? With Ambitions to become one of the greatest inspirational speakers of his generation / Lord Willing !!!
Location: Baltimore/Maryland, USA
Favorite Poets
Langston Hughs / Maya Angelou / Nikki Giovanni
Recent Work
Bee Beautiful
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Everybody can judge except me
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Rolwright
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Missing Messiah
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The Sun of God
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Thoughts (Simple and Plain)
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Involved Feelings
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