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Mar 29, 2012
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Pardonez-moi, darling
I want my lover to be the
way I eat his poetry,
like a delicacy, sweet to the bone
of his fingers,
salivating
and
taking me places
I've never been before
rendezvous-ing with untoward
lucid metaphor
naked in crisp white-ironed
summer-flowered sheets
of
possession and
unhinged imagination
him
unbuttoning my pedigree and
loosening my persuasion
until I scream
God, can you stop this mind-fuck
please
and let's go sailing the viridian
grid with mouthfuls of torrid sun
the villagers never liked you,
did they, their little black circle
of welts in the air.
— Kailashana2, Mar 29, 2012
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Proprietress o…
14 years 2 months ago
captivating...
I see some things never change...
this is très magnifique.
Kata
Kailashana2
14 years 2 months ago
(((((((((((((((((Kata))))))))
(((((((((((((((((Kata)))))))))))))))))))))) !!!!!