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Echo's Litany

Echo's realm is your sub conscience mind
Weaving words for you to find
A continuous litany,like a Mobius Strip
Sleep is the trigger that will trip

Born on the ash of a lost ember
In fitful dream
To be remembered
the laughter

Echo etches images
upon corridor walls
there in your memory
to be recalled
the words

Echo hums a familiar song
You've not heard it for so long
soft,softer
echo,echo gone

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: North Carolina, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, James Patterson, Dean Koontz, Leonard Cohen

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

14 years ago

Dear Chrys,

Your fertile mind, which comes through in all your works, is astounding. Good title, excellent imagery and flow through. I love the concept!

always, Cat (& eddy)

China Blue

China Blue

14 years ago

Cat

my thanks to you good lady will tell you why this was written but not here