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Mar 26, 2012
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Echo's Litany
Echo's realm is your sub conscience mind
Weaving words for you to find
A continuous litany,like a Mobius Strip
Sleep is the trigger that will trip
Born on the ash of a lost ember
In fitful dream
To be remembered
the laughter
Echo etches images
upon corridor walls
there in your memory
to be recalled
the words
Echo hums a familiar song
You've not heard it for so long
soft,softer
echo,echo gone
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
China Blue
14 years ago
Lon
many thanks again
Candlewitch
14 years ago
Dear Chrys,
Your fertile mind, which comes through in all your works, is astounding. Good title, excellent imagery and flow through. I love the concept!
always, Cat (& eddy)
China Blue
14 years ago
Cat
my thanks to you good lady will tell you why this was written but not here