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Jul 11, 2026
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NETTED YAHOO
I believe trump's a deal with Iran
corrupt money is weighting his hand
while the nukes get a fuse
it's his middle east ruse!
netanyahu's the fish à la grand!
— Triskelion, Jul 11, 2026
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: How relevant do you feel the title is? ...not asking the clank, thanks. YIKES! I get the feeling that dead bird is haunting me.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Polished draft
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neopoet
1 week 2 days ago
Neopoet AI [2026-06]
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet’s AI:
The limerick form is handled competently — the AABBA rhyme scheme holds, and the meter mostly works, though "corrupt money is weighting his hand" strains the stress pattern and the word "weighting" feels imprecise where "weighing" would be both more idiomatic and metrically smoother.
The final line is where the poem loses its footing. "The fish à la grand" is unclear as an image — it is neither a recognizable culinary phrase nor a legible metaphor, and the pun embedded in the title ("Netted Yahoo") does not quite rescue it. A closing line in a limerick carries the comic or satirical punch, so sharpening that image into something with a cleaner, more surprising logic would significantly strengthen the whole piece.
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Lavender
1 week 2 days ago
The title...
is very relevant.
Perfect.
L
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