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Mar 19, 2012
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Dear God
Dear God, you heartless bastard
Where the devil have you been
You’ve not been near nor by me
You have not been heard or seen
I have had no words of wisdom
Nor some fatherly advice
All my prayers have gone unanswered
Now, that isn’t very nice
Though I know I’m not an angel, and
In fact, sometimes I’m hell
There is good inside me somewhere
As I’m sure that you can tell
For the love of bleeding Jesus
I have never asked for much
If a miracle’s a problem
Could you please, just get in touch
— shazbat, Mar 19, 2012
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Style/Type: Structured: Western
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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weirdelf
14 years 3 months ago
Don't hold your breath
Santa, the Easter Bunny, the Tooth Fairy and all honest politicians are also ignoring me.
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