I dont need you by : nicole rose

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet’s AI:

The poem carries real emotional weight, and its core argument — that financial support and emotional support are not interchangeable — is a genuinely compelling idea worth building around. The contrast in lines four and five ("You support me financially / He supports me mentally") is the clearest, most effective moment in the piece: it is direct, balanced, and lands with force. The closing turn, revealing that the speaker cries for her father rather than the addressee, gives the poem an unexpected and moving destination.

The main area to develop is control over the rhyme scheme. Right now the poem reaches for rhyme (need, fee, disagree, bleed, me) but not consistently enough to feel intentional, and some lines bend their meaning to land a rhyme — "at the end of the day i still have to pay a fee / For what? I don't know" loses clarity in pursuit of the sound. A useful revision question: decide either to commit to rhyme throughout, shaping each line so the sense drives the sound rather than the other way around, or to let it go entirely and trust the natural rhythm of the spoken lines, which in several places is already strong. The grout acronym also arrives without enough context for a reader outside the situation to follow; expanding that image or cutting it would tighten the poem's emotional logic considerably.

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I am going to respond to only one of your poems.
I've chosen "I don't need you", because I made the most sense out of it.  
I see the murky waters that leaves you with these feelings of being left out and alone. I feel the anger at being called "Ugly".

I think that you should go back and fix up your punctuation and the capitalization.

And what is G.R.O.U.T.? ~ Geezer.