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Jun 27, 2026
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Beautiful Girl
She stands, obliviously, at the crosswalk.
Reminding me of a lovely girl I’ve long forgotten.
The light changes, and I have to move on.
I leave her there, but the memory follows.
— Michael Anthony, Jun 27, 2026
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Polished draft
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Lavender
3 weeks 1 day ago
Beautifully Girl
Hello, Michael,
Hope you are well!
Aw... of course this takes place at a crosswalk. How appropriate.
I can envision the scenario so well.
Thank you!
L
Michael Anthony
3 weeks 1 day ago
Much better, thanks L!
Much better, thanks L!
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