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Jun 21, 2026
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OrangeJuice
I treasure the little things
Things others seem to
Overlook
I never realized how much i have taken them for granted and how
Delicate and
Fragile they are
Until they are no longer there.
— nimue, Jun 21, 2026
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Final polish
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Lavender
1 month ago
OrangeJuice
Hello, nimue,
I really love the word "delicate" here, because that describes this poem - precious and sensitive. I do wonder about removing "and" in both areas, and making the entire poem lowercase. The poem may appear even more tender.
I imagine this is about much, much more than orange juice - at least it does to this reader. This is lovely.
Thank you,
Lavender
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