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Born from a Comet's Prayer

There's a flutter in me made of butterfly wings-

It hums when the stars lean close.  

I sip moonlight from chipped teacups,  

Trade secrets with unicorns who forget they're not gods.

 

Every time I walk barefoot through clover,  

Mother Earth remembers my name.  

They say I was born from an exploding nova  

That formed ice draped in pink and lavender skies and lullabies.

 

They say I was born from a comet's prayer,  

Draped in teal skies and lullabies,  

My laugh stitched with stardust,  

My sorrow tucked in a bottle to be thrown back to the sea  

On days when I forget I am magic.

 

And although I've never seen my reflection clearly  

The fairies say I carry the shape of dawn  

And the eyes of someone who's danced with a storm and lived to tell it gently.

 

My mother told me mermaids taught me how to sing,  

Goats gave me ambition,  

And my father-my father taught me to dance in the galaxies.

 

So, if you ever find yourself lost between raindrops and radio static,  

Listen for the echo of a girl who sips from chipped teacups,  

Sings with mermaids,  

And dances in galaxies taught by her father's footsteps.

 

She'll remind you-

Magic isn't something you find.  

It's something you remember.

 

And now they are not gone—

They are lifted.

 

 

My mother wears her laughter like wings,

light threaded through her hands,

moving freely through the places

she once only dreamed of.

 

My father dances where gravity loosens,

his footsteps written in constellations,

teaching galaxies what it means

to move with joy instead of weight.

 

When the night is especially quiet,

I feel them pass through me—

a flutter,

a hush,

a remembering—

 

butterfly wings stirring the dark,

as if the sky itself

is breathing me back into myself.

 

And I know then:

No one I love has ever left.

 

They have only changed altitudes.

 

— juliemakhoul3458, Jun 01, 2026

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

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Region, Country: Minnesota, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe and William Shakespeare

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Sen99

Sen99

1 day 9 hours ago

Comet's Prayer

This is an excellent tribute, enjoyable to read:  Strong title, flow of imagery and ideas, nice word choices, engages the reader, nice poignant ending

Well scribed, thanks for share

Sen99 

 

Geezer

Geezer

1 day 8 hours ago

Your muse...

must be one of the busiest I've ever seen!
it rambles over the landscape of imagination like a thing of great urgency.

"So, if you ever find yourself lost between raindrops and radio static,"

My favorite line! ~ Geezer.