Profound

PROFOUND

Your thoughts are
as rosy
as rosy is my mind
where can I
such lovely critics
Like you  ever find?

Those who give five stars
and
give hope to add some more
of perfumed hope
to a piece of rose
perhaps half done
but the rosy poem
is complete
my rose is
as sweet
as sweet
as sweet

AFTER THOUGHT

So let it be
some day twill
another rose  be.
perhaps a red one
lovely one you must see.