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Jun 30, 2010
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yOUR pAIn
Pain that you alone bear
will you with all share
you say eternity
I take it you mean fraternity
and
let the pain
dissolve within.......
Your poetry is the life
that helps all
face bigger strife
and
so I can surmise
pains just a ruse,
a surprise
and
that its the demise
of a solitary existence
Ah! your pain beneath
is life’s very essencE
all we need here
is your presence.
— loved, Jun 30, 2010
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