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yOUR pAIn

Pain that  you alone bear
will you with all share
you say eternity
I take it you mean fraternity
and 
let the pain
dissolve within.......

Your poetry is  the life
that helps all
face bigger strife
and
so I can surmise
pains just a  ruse,
a surprise

and

that its the demise
of a solitary  existence
Ah! your pain beneath
is life’s  very essencE
all we need here
is your presence.

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— loved, Jun 30, 2010

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