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UPPER AND LOWER SHINING LAKES
Upper shining lake/sea and Lower shining lake. When there
on the ground was a root that looked exactly like the kookaburra,
Jayne was sending me, the bird had come to me and manifested
itself there in the forest, among the tall firs and huge boulders
that make the path, glacially worn.
Oh the walk today was so lovely going past the place where those
glacial rocks were played on by the pouring of roots, that found
cracks and dips and looked like fingers playing music, I likened
it to the music of a Bach fugue continuously trying to reach water
to reach its end and never quite making it. Some thin roots have been
grasping the stones over the tops of them like the legs of spiders.
Then the dells where there usually was water were now dry in
Summer, we having been in Telemark most Summers.
When we reached Nedre Blanksjö, glistening in the sun reflecting
the blue sky and white clouds, there were people abseiling over
the lake, harness and rope and one girl did it while we were watching,
she looked like a sea gull arms out to the sides but she dipped
into the water, not perhaps something she intended should happen,
her friends waited on the other side, I even felt I would ask if I could do it
until she went into the water then I decided no, the walk was just beginning.
We then passed the little bower, or hide, that had been green the last
time we saw it, it had gone through a Winter. Oh this walk is so
beautiful all the way interesting and varied. We finally arrived at
the upper lake where the surface was indeed blank-shining, polished,
like its name-Blanksjö.
I thought the breeze did the polishing as behind the ripples it lay smoothed!
Lily pads floated on it and reflections played with the colours of the trees,
we stopped beside it to eat and drink a little snack, then descended
again to the valley nearly 3 hours and we don't walk slowly, even
Erik with his 84 yrs is fit only occasionally needing a hand down
a very steep bit. For his age he could be called athletic. Walking briskly
and with a lilt to the stride.
Bits of notes as I went:-
The pounding of the feet
(wearing the end of the root of a tree to a tiny clump)
the one, the two the beat.
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Never stand still on a bog
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Dead tree pointing at heaven
shadow of a tree pointing
pointless stub-tree broken off by storms
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A babble like the gabble
of the geese
some women appeared.
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Ebony and ivory thoughts
hard like ice and stone
like iron and bone
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45% in woods
on needles and stones,
even feathers and bones
and definitely cones,
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Even ants create trolls with their heaps
grasses growing out of the top as disguise?
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The ever moving of the lake,
the breeze from the west,
and yet it lies just
where it always does
that water deep and dark beneath
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The old dead fallen tree
as we pass we hear it crack
every time!
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If nature speaks,
just stop and listen
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Jayne, oh Jayne,
you send your dream-time kookaburra
on the wing,
make summer flowers of Norway
ring their bells,
in shadowed dells they light the sky,
as I lie in the meadow,
breathing in sweet perfumes of life,
all growing and eager,
so free of strife,
innocently existing all round me,
when we can see all.
You'll see the flowers again,
just wait a while
I've not gone my very last mile,
I know it,
I feel it,
a trip in my step,
the fates cannot swallow me,
no not yet.
SO THERE! Love Ann.
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