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May 24, 2010
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Losrtis
From life giving water made
A love created, not to fade
From a small river it came
Separated by oceans and pain
Eyes of sweet mother earth
To see love is no mirth
Hands to fit a queen
for eons in memories seen
Beauty of the rarest rose
Captured in a mouth and nose
Scarlet petals in lips are shown
None of equal has ever grown
One chance had, and let go
Saddest tears made to let flow
For a future that hasn't come
A happy life undone
Powers still reside
Torn apart by the tide
Feeding from time to time
On words and rhyme
If the gods are kind
The will of the mind
All obstacles will seem as none
Heart ache and tears undone
From the river born
Rays of sunlight in the morn
All darkness expelled
True love could not be felled
A love created, not to fade
From a small river it came
Separated by oceans and pain
Eyes of sweet mother earth
To see love is no mirth
Hands to fit a queen
for eons in memories seen
Beauty of the rarest rose
Captured in a mouth and nose
Scarlet petals in lips are shown
None of equal has ever grown
One chance had, and let go
Saddest tears made to let flow
For a future that hasn't come
A happy life undone
Powers still reside
Torn apart by the tide
Feeding from time to time
On words and rhyme
If the gods are kind
The will of the mind
All obstacles will seem as none
Heart ache and tears undone
From the river born
Rays of sunlight in the morn
All darkness expelled
True love could not be felled
— johan, May 24, 2010
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