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My raw sad weep
for my girl
I held as she slept
on my chest at night
My raw sad weep
as I held her close
for all those
joyful early years
of life and discovery
My raw sad weep
as she grew tall
strong and keen
to challenge the world
My raw sad weep
as the door now closes
and I sleep
with only the
memories
of my girl
Ellie LaCrosse
for my girl
I held as she slept
on my chest at night
My raw sad weep
as I held her close
for all those
joyful early years
of life and discovery
My raw sad weep
as she grew tall
strong and keen
to challenge the world
My raw sad weep
as the door now closes
and I sleep
with only the
memories
of my girl
Ellie LaCrosse