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Feb 28, 2010
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loves rock
loves rock is strong and brave,
it lives on the cliffs of the houha river,
as love spends the day at her fathers grave,
the touch of her rocks hand makes love shiver.
devotion is felt with all their hearts,
moving together,
like working arts,
their souls alight with stormy weather.
loves rock hears her sigh,
it was not to be amiss,
she felt as she were on some strange high,
she new it came from her loving rocks kiss.
it lives on the cliffs of the houha river,
as love spends the day at her fathers grave,
the touch of her rocks hand makes love shiver.
devotion is felt with all their hearts,
moving together,
like working arts,
their souls alight with stormy weather.
loves rock hears her sigh,
it was not to be amiss,
she felt as she were on some strange high,
she new it came from her loving rocks kiss.
Comments
Rob Williams
16 years 2 months ago
sounds to me that your feet
Dark.Poetress
16 years 2 months ago
your good at giving comments
Mark
16 years 2 months ago
Quite nice
Dark.Poetress
16 years 2 months ago
wow thx i knew i was getting