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Feb 10, 2010
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Brave Blue Sea
Brave Blue Sea In days like these, you smilein front of darling flowers,silky as night;you bendlike wintry wind,like soft and mumblingtwigs and bushes.
I was stilted but phrasedlike a book,and underneaththe stars hanging byyour darkened balcony,I became a silly champion
of some sort,amidst the wordsthat didn't ever come. They never were so distinctand so clear,as tonight.Ah, those times and seasonsthat won’t ever be;both the sameand different,like a relentless movie that we sawin times gone by:Only this lovestands still like a frenzied whisperchantedby a brave blue sea.
Comments
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Really lovely poem
hugo la rosa
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Anne:
the_fool
16 years 2 months ago
not bad
hugo la rosa
16 years 2 months ago
The_Fool:
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I know that feeling...
hugo la rosa
16 years 2 months ago
Xena:
yenti
16 years 2 months ago
Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 2 months ago
Ian.T:
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Ann:
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
And it had humour,
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Just a sigh from me dear man