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Dream
Lately shit and words just won’t get threw
People trying to help but don’t give em a chance to
Deny everything, and just try to move on
Only time I feel good is when I drink or smoke bud
I’m a sickness, even denied by my own blood
All’s I want to know is love… and to be loved
Got nothing to make me feel warm when I wake up
Feel small, weak, and defenseless like a new born pup
New day now how will I get my stomach filled?
No tools but still got a whole bridge to build
If I want to get on a happy road to life
And try to keep positive to get away from the strife
Find my own place and life happily ever after
Grow old, be successful, while full of laughter
I’d do anything to accomplish that and live that dream
Till then it’s all I got to hang on to and think of at night when I dream
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