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My Love Is My Curse.

I have a curse.
My curse is that I fell in love.
Fell in love with someone.

My love is my curse.

I fell in love with someone that is kind.
Someone that is full of life.
Kindness.
Happiness and sadness.
Someone just like me.

Someone that was always there.

This someone stole my heart.
He stole my heart and ran away.
Ran away to leave me in pain.
Leave me in my time of need.
If only he knew how bad he hurt me.
How sad he made me.

He left me and i shall never forget it.

He turn around and walked away.
Walked away never to look back.
Look back at me.
If only he did he could see.
See what he did to me.
He left me in pieces.
Never to be the same.
So I picked myself up
and put myself back together.
Never to be the same.

He loved me and then he didn't.

He hurt me and stole my heart because he lost it.
He lost the feelings
The feelings he had for me.
And then  to hem I was just a puzzle.
A puzzle he put together and quickly destroyed.
And toke some of the pieces so no one can finish the puzzle again.

So I couldn't love someone the same ever again.

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Carchuleto

Carchuleto

16 years 3 months ago

MMk

alright Skye I like the puzzle pieces concept. It sucks how that works out eh? I only gave you 3 stars instead of more because I believed that you got caught up in using the repetition aspect again. If you really really really want to write all your poems like that then ok. Just remember to not overdo it.
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broken_skye

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Carch

I am not going to do all my poems like this but I thought it might look beter this way.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

I have a curse. My curse is

I have a curse. My curse is that I fell in love. Fell in love with someone. My love is my curse. Someone that was always there. This someone stole my heart He left me and I shall never forget it. He turned around and walked away. Walked away and never looked back. He loved me and then he didn’t. He hurts me and steals my heart because he lost it. He lost my feelings To him I'm just a puzzle A puzzle he put together and quickly destroyed. He kept some of my pieces so no one can finish the puzzle again. So I couldn’t love someone the same ever again. Just some thoughts, Anna
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broken_skye

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks

Thank you for comment even though i only think what it means.