Rain

Sweeping rain falling gently
In still darkest night
Lonely heart has awoken
To warm tempting sight

Stole sweet tender kiss
Under honesties great tree
My tears like the rain drops
Giving union to thee

You touch like a Cherub
And speak no goodbye
I kiss you quite softly
Lips captured your sigh

For you I now touch
And gently caress
To fondle your mind
I seek nothing less

An explosion of rain
And sweetest desire
Loves river in flood
To pour on Mans fire

Once casted adrift
On an ocean of time
For your tears I did seek
And your heart I did find

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Comments

lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Ooh Lala

Magical, yes, love is in the air and your poem has told the story well. Good one mate. Lyz. XX

Stuart Reiss

16 years 4 months ago

awww thanks Liz. I had such

awww thanks Liz. I had such a great day yesterday. Also discovered the markets at the rocks, they are cool.....yesterday...was so so nice...:-)

lyz

16 years 4 months ago

As I said, oolala

I am so glad you enjoyed yesterday, no thoughts about us at home, lol. No, I am happy to have read this beaut, keep them coming. Love Lyz. XX

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Stuart

Beautifully writen from the heart ... love and hugs Jayne x x x

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Yes a very sweet poem

Yes a very sweet poem Stuart, full of passion and that in such a graceful manner, she is sure to like that. Ann of Norway

Stuart Reiss

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks Annbest regards

Thanks Ann best regards Stu p.s she did like it

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Just wonderful here

Hello and may I say this is a really sweet poetic verse you have did, There is only one thing the word honestys it should be spelt honesties. If I am incorrect you may call me out on it. Kudos to a heartfelt poem Ms Mona

Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

Hey Thanks!

Thanks Ms Mona, I changed it as your probably right and its sounds right. Really glad you enjoyed it. That's half the reason of why I write. Best regards Stu :-)