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Dec 19, 2009
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S.L.R.
laying in your solitude,
words unspoken,
promisses of tomorrow
but broken.
a touch of your hand
cold embrace
no emoition left
on your face
Sweet Sara forever
this day had to part
Sweet Sara Forever
has broken my heart
— mardy3, Dec 19, 2009
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