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Nov 15, 2009
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My lover comes home
My lover comes home
The days of waiting
Shall lapse in moments
When love is all that matters
But the wait can be killing too
When if it appears
To the other
It doesn't that much matter
27 days will pass
Then you will bask
Encased in the arms of your lover,
Only then I shall ask
How did the remaining days pass?
28 days later
I shall surely return
To your memories
Share in return,
Hope your lover,
Fiancée in your case,
Then love for your wait
Lovingly does smilingly shower
For all those days and nights
Lost as millions of hours
— loved, Nov 15, 2009
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