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Nov 02, 2009
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Lovely Making it out
Lovely
I was actually enacting every bit
As I read the beautiful piece
Except that I wouldn't go back to sleep
I’d go in for another session of love
Such beauty is poised
Once in a while
I shall repeat your poem
In love and similar style
Just lovely
— loved, Nov 02, 2009
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