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Oct 24, 2009
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Bliss
Sweet? No,
Bitter sweet, bliss
How could something like a kiss
Fulfill my every wish
How could something like a smile
Make everything all worthwhile
How could something like your laugh
Cut my sorrow right in half
How come when I look into your eyes
It’s like gazing at starry skies
How come every time you’re near
I lose every ounce of fear
How come when you go away
My heart will never stay
How come now I feel like this
Like I finally got my wish
Foolish and ignorant
Gone insane with bliss.
— marich7, Oct 24, 2009
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