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Oct 24, 2009
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First sin
First sin
Eve tempted to do that sin
That sin grown as a gigantic palace for him
In that palace
Devils are playing a show to captivate human souls
There is a largest great pit full of thorns and fire
He sent his powerful slave to bring nobles
to misguide this world from the path of God
"Lust" is doing all conspiracies for his command
False attractions he has made
to pull all weaker souls in the path of lust
he gives all powers to his slaves and his followers
Wealth and pleasures
are also his choclates to our childish Souls
he will ruin this planet in violence and in cruelty
Come to hold His hands
to protect yoursouls from Him
Our father is calling us with Love
We will hide in His holy shadow
Eve tempted to do that sin
That sin grown as a gigantic palace for him
In that palace
Devils are playing a show to captivate human souls
There is a largest great pit full of thorns and fire
He sent his powerful slave to bring nobles
to misguide this world from the path of God
"Lust" is doing all conspiracies for his command
False attractions he has made
to pull all weaker souls in the path of lust
he gives all powers to his slaves and his followers
Wealth and pleasures
are also his choclates to our childish Souls
he will ruin this planet in violence and in cruelty
Come to hold His hands
to protect yoursouls from Him
Our father is calling us with Love
We will hide in His holy shadow
— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 24, 2009
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