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Oct 21, 2009
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Tears
Tears
You take away tears
From his eye too
Surely he must have loved you
In the next life he will
I’m sure being waiting for you.
Grief is sad
But it must be overcome
The sooner the better
Fantastic work if you merit
What I have to say.
I am just a passerby poet
By the way
Along side the meadows of loneliness
Shines many a moment
Only if one knows
Where to search
Even during sad moments
Your grief hurts
No doubt but poets are few
Who have their selected clout?
You are one such poet
Of that there can be no doubt
That we all can see
May the very thought on your face
Bring some glee.
— loved, Oct 21, 2009
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