SMS

Oh SMS please fly with speed
For you have the power my valiant steed
Deliver the message of heart felt gladness
No further pain, nor sorrow nor sadness

I wish to advise to all that would read
Today's the day I am to be freed
So SMS please make great haste
Please for my love, no time to waste

Oh SMS just fly through walls
To the one I love, the one I adore

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Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Let me know what she says.

Let me know what she says. Hope it's I luv u. Delightful little SMS poem. ~A There are no strangers in Paradise.

Stuart Reiss

16 years 6 months ago

Hmm,it was a no lol….Best

Hmm, it was a no lol.... Best regards Stu A stranger is just a friend you havent met yet (my fathers line...cant take the credit..but i like it)

lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Okay

You twisted my arm, lol. I like it and it is a quirky write and I am sorry she said no, but if you dont ask, you never know, now you can set your sights higher hun. Lol. I mean it. I would like to give you 5 more stars for steppin up, being the man so to speak. Whats done is done, no going back, only forwards and good comes to those who wait, but please push a little as well, lol. Your sms poem was quite good, so keep them comin. Be proud. Love Lyz, XX.

Stuart Reiss

16 years 6 months ago

She is just a memory and I

She is just a memory and I think her potential may out weigh her reality which would be quite sad but destiny is not for everyone, just a lucky few that believe with every ounce of their being, behave themselves and are strong of character. Liz, if you and Jayne get together and decide on a topic or genre I will write a poem to suit. I could do the same for you guys.....what do ya think?? Neopoet would be the richer for it and I think we could have some fun.. Best regards Stuart P.S let me know :-)

lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Memory or not

Well done and move on, lol. You ask Jayne about the latter and let me know, sounds okay and fun. See you on your next post, love Lyz. XX

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Stuart

Awwwww At least you had the courage to step forwards my friend, and baring your emotions is not an easy thing I am still being clawed out of my shell and thats taken ten years, with JackHammers ... lol and this is a little Gem,I adored it ... your writing so beautifully since you have been here and its such a lovely fresh poem LOL SMS poem gotta love that ... My son is the SMS king sends about 400 a day thank god he has a plan for we would be paying in Blood otherwise lmao He fancies himself a ladies man and judging by the visitors we get ... LOL well that speaks for itself ;) Smile her loss is another beauty's gain I say Love and hugs Jayne x x

Stuart Reiss

16 years 6 months ago

If a poem could be a cutey,

If a poem could be a cutey, this would be mine :-) I wanted it to have the feel of that modern remake of Romeo and Juliet with Claire Danes and Leonardo Di Caprio. Kind of old meets new once again. Thanks guys for the comments, I really mean it. If you give people poems to read that dont read poems its such a waste if they dont appreciate them you know. So happy that you guys like this little offering Best Regards Stuart

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

You did just that, Stuart,

You did just that, Stuart, that was the image that came to my mind. R & J texting. Glad that it never came to the potion drinking. ;-) Speaking of the flick versions of Shakespeare, my son fell him love with his work through them. The first was *Ran* ~ a Japanese version of King Lear in 1985. Branagh's *Much Ado About Nothing* (a favourite) etc. came afterward. We've become visual junkies, and our hands more dexterous through texting and surfing. lol. ~A There are no strangers in Paradise.

Stuart Reiss

16 years 6 months ago

Yes, i agree….self

Yes, i agree....self confessed visual junkie.. I learn so much more from audio visual than I ever will from reading...just the way I learn I am really glad that R&J came to mind.... THANKS ~A

petal31

16 years 5 months ago

Aww Stu, I love this poem!!

Aww Stu, I love this poem!! I had a real belly laugh of familiarity and my thoughts were exactly.... "oh, it sounds like leo in Baz's R&J".