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Sep 26, 2009
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THE OWNERSHIP
THE OWNERSHIP
Ten years have past bye
Since Hammer had control over life
He trusted his visual feeling a betrayal of a lie
He trusted his hearing , her songs seducing his pride
She was a mystical being with a heart cold as ice
The undead , a night walker , a predator
A bloodless goddess, a taker of life
Not unlike the thousands Hammer has slain
In the blink of a eye
But her magic mixed with, stilettos heels
Her leather intoxicating beyond a kings will
A voice of medusas a lure for blood and kill
Hammer broke free , there is no peace
With this mystical being
She loved someone else
He is the undead like herself
A night walker
Midnights king
Hammer thought to slay
Them all to be free
But one look at her
How could he
And as he watched
Their love , he became human like
Spearing the life of midnights king
Hammer mounted his horse
His sword without a stain of blood
The crown around his neck
Never claimed her love
He road off in search
Of a true heart with flesh and blood
OK now that Hammer is free from ?????
He can live free and find love with his own kind
And be true to his nature Hammer the conquer of the undead
Ten years have past bye
Since Hammer had control over life
He trusted his visual feeling a betrayal of a lie
He trusted his hearing , her songs seducing his pride
She was a mystical being with a heart cold as ice
The undead , a night walker , a predator
A bloodless goddess, a taker of life
Not unlike the thousands Hammer has slain
In the blink of a eye
But her magic mixed with, stilettos heels
Her leather intoxicating beyond a kings will
A voice of medusas a lure for blood and kill
Hammer broke free , there is no peace
With this mystical being
She loved someone else
He is the undead like herself
A night walker
Midnights king
Hammer thought to slay
Them all to be free
But one look at her
How could he
And as he watched
Their love , he became human like
Spearing the life of midnights king
Hammer mounted his horse
His sword without a stain of blood
The crown around his neck
Never claimed her love
He road off in search
Of a true heart with flesh and blood
OK now that Hammer is free from ?????
He can live free and find love with his own kind
And be true to his nature Hammer the conquer of the undead
— press, Sep 26, 2009
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