Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

THE OWNERSHIP

THE OWNERSHIP

Ten years have past bye
Since Hammer had control over life
He trusted his visual feeling  a betrayal of a lie
He trusted his hearing  , her songs  seducing  his pride
She was a mystical  being with a heart cold  as ice
The undead , a night walker , a predator 
A bloodless goddess, a taker of life

Not unlike the thousands Hammer has slain
In the blink of a eye
But her magic  mixed with, stilettos  heels
Her leather intoxicating  beyond a kings will
A voice of medusas a lure for blood and kill

Hammer broke free , there is no peace
With this mystical being
She loved someone else
He is the undead like herself
A night walker
Midnights king 

Hammer thought to slay
Them all to be free
But one look at her
How could he
And as he watched
Their love  , he became human like
Spearing the life of midnights king

Hammer mounted his horse
His sword without a stain of blood 
The crown around his neck
Never claimed her love
He road off in search
Of a true heart with flesh and blood



OK now that  Hammer is free from ?????
He can live free and find love with his own kind
And be true to his nature  Hammer the conquer   of the undead

— press, Sep 26, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

More from this author

Critiques