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Sep 19, 2009
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Oneiros ‘61
Once in wheatened fields
He ran
Exhaulted by the wind
Limbered stretching,
Brushing legs, and arms
Soaring over golden ends
Undulating touches
Toward the blue earth split sky
Ahead, behind, aside
The same distant magic line
Never reached except out for
Exuberated glad.
Are you listening? Sir? The answer? I’m not sure...sir. Anything? I guess not sir. Someone else! Who knows the answer?...
Blonde desktop sitting
Jammed to the next stopped
Waiting
For the sound ahead
To speed up get out
Get away
Sideways glance -
Squared glassed out to the other side and...
Once in wheatened fields,
He Ran.
Again.
— ArrowWords, Sep 19, 2009
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