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Guess I need to clarify for votes on a title needed
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This is not a Title for a poem. It is a story of 1000 words about a 16 year old who has always been trusted by her nother who works nights. Tonight, she's jumping the trust.
I named the story " Trust to Lie By" because that's exactly what she's doing. Taking the trust she knows her mother has in her and uses it for her own pleasure.
There is controversary in the title. One says mine has no creativity and wants it changed to simply " Trust"
The question is: If you came across a story with these two titles, WHICH one MIGHT get you to read enough of it to see if it was interesting.
That is the question I need answered.
Thanks!
I named the story " Trust to Lie By" because that's exactly what she's doing. Taking the trust she knows her mother has in her and uses it for her own pleasure.
There is controversary in the title. One says mine has no creativity and wants it changed to simply " Trust"
The question is: If you came across a story with these two titles, WHICH one MIGHT get you to read enough of it to see if it was interesting.
That is the question I need answered.
Thanks!