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I Can See You





You've survived the rain

of red roses that one day

I surely offered and that

never, never really arrived.

 

I can see you, graceful

in the magical presence

of unrealized dreams,

with the lovely blue

dress I thought you'll

wear, and in the midst

of so much silence I've

fixed your sad smile in

the beautiful place that

never was, still waiting

for that empty future,

living and pulsating in

some promise I'd made.

 


This afternoon, empty

streets seem dazzled by

the fragrance of silence,

while the kindness of

your gaze is suddenly

intertwined with this

endless love that floods

every single corner of the

world, and all that exists.





 

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Hugo...

This poem is dancing in my Heart... This is so beautiful and graceful. And it speaks of love, with an exquisite flow and touch. Reading it, made my Heart smile. It has a tenderness, that brightened my day. Gentle regards, my dear Poet and friend. Raven
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Raven

Thank you for your beautiful words. It feels good to have such a talented friend, and especially one that likes what I write. Love, Hugo
L

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Hugo

Love ,Love ,Love. Wonderful. No need for words when in sync u both be. Just beautiful. Lyz XX
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Lyz

Thank you for your nice comment. You know, I have dedicated this poem to all who are in love with Love itself, and that includes all poets. It's only fair! Gentle regards, Hugo
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Hugo

I liked your title and the fluidity of each and every line. This speaks of the kind of love that is in it for the long haul. Beautiful words, great language usage! Always, Cat
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Cat

You are always kind and amiable, that I feel at a loss for words. I love your comments. Thank you indeed, I feel flattered by your beautiful words. Gentle regards, Hugo
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Hugo

This speaks of love and devotion, the devotion that comes from many years together, Hugo you never fail to amaze me with the beauty of your imagination , I feel that this is one of your best congratulations on spotlight for such a wonderful poem ... I cannot find fault with this piece :) love and higgest bugs Jayne :)
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

My Dear Seren

Thanks for your wonderful comment. Your visits are always fun. And thank you for the news, I wouldn't have noticed the spotlight otherwise. Love, Hugo