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Sep 09, 2009
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I Can See You
You've survived the rain
of red roses that one day
I surely offered and that
never, never really arrived.
I can see you, graceful
in the magical presence
of unrealized dreams,
with the lovely blue
dress I thought you'll
wear, and in the midst
of so much silence I've
fixed your sad smile in
the beautiful place that
never was, still waiting
for that empty future,
living and pulsating in
some promise I'd made.
This afternoon, empty
streets seem dazzled by
the fragrance of silence,
while the kindness of
your gaze is suddenly
intertwined with this
endless love that floods
every single corner of the
world, and all that exists.
Comments
Ravenshakti
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Hugo...
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Raven
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Lyz
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Cat
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
My Dear Seren