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Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

Two Quills, I AM!

Awesome, I love it!!{daemoms] spelled right? Forth stanza perhaps omit "soon" and "the"? ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Thanks Janice!

Well I’m not sure about [daemoms] but I believe (or at least I hope) that“daemons” is spelled correctly in reference to classical Greek mythology as apposed to the Judeo-Christian version- demons. Diamones could also be an alternative. :) Good call on (soon) and (the)… I am grateful for your words here.

sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

~Two Quills, I Am!

I have always loved this one darlin..you have such a creative and amazing mind..which is only one of the reasons I love you so deeply ~winks~ A writer of words Some written in iron Some laced and spun in gold Riddles and rhymes Each a mystery for us to behold Wanting and waiting Lingering on each little syllable Wondering how you do what it is you do Is truly unbelievable. But honestly ~My Love~ this I know to be true about the writing of words It's an emotional outlet, a chance at being free. Just a creative way of conveying what's happening within you and me. These thoughts trickel out from the end of your pen. Sometimes I see you writing so madly as if there's not going to be an end. A poetic expression A story you must tell Sometimes you make it sweet like heaven Sometimes you make it rough and angry like hell But in the end we don't sit and judge you. For we understand my love Your words have no voice It's a born affliction not of your choice. We don't need to hold a conversation with you or have pictures for us to see We only need to read the words lay out to know that a ~Poet~ indeed you are. ~SweetSpirit~

2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

My Queen!

Bah!…You are just being bias ~My Sweet~ Never the less , I’d be lost in this world without you or your words. So... Walk with me now in silence Across the heavens we will tread Then lay down with me forever Upon this life’s eternal bed Moi

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

wonderful

I loved everything about this poem!It was amazing!

Ravenshakti

16 years 9 months ago

I keep saying... Beautiful...

But it's just that some words shoudn't be altered. And yes... All we have to do, is taste some of your poetry, and we learn a little something... Shine on, Corey... Raven

2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Raven

I would never turn down that word on my page. Your compliments are like diamonds to me, like little gifts brought forth from the heavens by the stars in the night. I think I shall!

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear 2 Quills

You indeed sir, are a poet, and I am glad you decided to share. I love this. I would not change a word.From your heart you have created a great poetic piece. Lyz XX

Electric Blue

16 years 8 months ago

2 Quills am I

Welcome my friend to the Neopoet family. My friend you echo my words that describe another close to me. My demon angel is he. You second verse is him totally verse six my demon angel is poetry in motion with a smile so diving just melts you away. I think this awesome my friend you created the image of my demon angel I love the flow I write mainly free verse but a few that rhyme wonderful my friend Electric Blue