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Jul 22, 2009
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Cat's Pee
Cat's pee a dangling participle peppered your upper lip
Although you were oblivious
I sat waiting to hear new revelations
Magnificently you dissected Genet's "Notre Dame des Fleurs."
So I listen until your words meander
I left you sitting with lover Nora
Lumbering your way into my room
I allege sleep
While you degenerated into a stupor
Lepadah
copyright 2009
— Lepadah, Jul 22, 2009
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