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Half an Hour with Cleetus

Behold the man.

Skin black as burnt
leather, a rusted comb

set in a balding afro
almost like an ant farm

with a few hairs 
left twitching
just to cheer his
next step or study--

his underscored Bible,
blood read,
feathered and bent
from the sun,
each dog eared
corner marked with

designs.  

"Hey, hey, you know
about the Acts of the Apostles,
you know those motherfuckers
walking by us have 9millimeters,
you know I got Medicaid but I know
Zionists use it so I like the local clinic,
I see the manager in the store
and he's on retail he don't answer
to Allah or anything he don't answer
my questions about a food stamp,
he don't answer me about them
things.  It's fine though cause I
got the Word and I'm gonna be fine
fine a place of my own yo!!  I used
to take lithium but it had poison
and I don't need that I need God
my mouth gets sweaty, careful,
look behind you!  Those
motherfuckers have 9millimeters!
Hey you know about the
Acts of the Apostles?!"

I don't blame anyone.

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 9 months ago

John

Wow, where to begin? First off would be great imagery with Cletus - I could picture him perfectly, and I feel that you pulled off his...eh...persona? quite well. Ln 11 - read or red? Ln 29/30 - double 'fine' intentional, or was the second one to be 'find'? Lastly, kudos to using motherfu**ers in a poem. That takes balls. ps. love your new avatar! ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Sundown you better take care if I find you've been creepin' 'round my back stairs. Sometimes I think it's a sin when I feel like I'm winnin' when I'm losing again" - Gordon Lightfoot
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Quillsvein1

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you

Jess! Cleetus is yet another man whom the mental health system has failed. I wanted it to be "read", a play on words, because he's obviously read it so many times--"fine" and "fine" are intentional, because that's the way he talks. He has pressured speech so he says one word when he means the other. GB