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THESE FIVE SENSES



THESE FIVE SENSE... You stir me from a dormancy I never knew existedA quivering sensation I never knew consistedof visceral responses to your voice, your words,your very wishes. Thoughts rush from melike wild waters crashingover a lurching bow,throwing mists of magic creating this fantasy for me now -allowing me to visualizethe connection with you somehow.            "I can smell you like sea spray, taste the salt on your lips, feel the touch of skin to skin -see the wonder in those darkened eyes, even hear saddness in those passionate sighs." You fill me from pore to pore -each of my senses will have no more. BjR  25 June '09