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Jun 25, 2009
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dying at the door
the knuckles are weary and sore
stranded at the entrance into the door
hope has shut you out ,and faith-
in discourse also can be a bait
who is the cruel gate-keeper
that tightens the twist on the knob
you have endured miles to reach there-of
that naught is linient enough to release love
a journey-man with his load , and tidings
a top his head , in cold bitter await
and his medal for all his troubles-
is neither here nor there ; or double
somes gates are a shield to restrain encroaching
though the motiv of the traveller is sure
but reaches the goal only to find
that the aim has tricked his state of mind
stranded at the entrance into the door
hope has shut you out ,and faith-
in discourse also can be a bait
who is the cruel gate-keeper
that tightens the twist on the knob
you have endured miles to reach there-of
that naught is linient enough to release love
a journey-man with his load , and tidings
a top his head , in cold bitter await
and his medal for all his troubles-
is neither here nor there ; or double
somes gates are a shield to restrain encroaching
though the motiv of the traveller is sure
but reaches the goal only to find
that the aim has tricked his state of mind
— emeka ozurumba, Jun 25, 2009
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