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Thirteen Stanzas Thirty-nine Lines




Thirteen Stanzas
Thirty-nine Lines


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haikus/
senyrus


a very nice thing
about haikus/senyrus: their
frames grant a freedom

haoeukaous/
sepbraous

a sr- tphaoeus theupbg
pw haoeukaous/sepbraous: thaeur
tpraeupls tkpwrapbt a tpraoefpl

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the
sign

morning's walk, I mark
the sign "Speed Humps 20 Miles
Per Hour," slow my pace

-t
saoeupb

phoerpbgz waubg, eu pharbg
-t saoeupb "spaoed hufpls 20 phaoeuls
per hour," shroe pheu paeus

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at
nub
of
palm

lovebird, peach-faced, sits
at nub of palm, fluffs against
Phoenix morning cold

at
tphub
of
paupl

hrufpweurd, paoefp-tpaeufd, seuts
at tphub of paupl, tphrufs tkpwepbs
tpaoefrpbgs phoerpbg koeld

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voices
carry

children splash at pool;
voices carry past the fence---
they stop at my ear

sroeufs
kaer

kheurpb sphrarb at paol;
sroeufs kaer pafpt -t tpepbs---
the stop at pheu aoer

---

glass
balls
hang

three glass balls hang
from a porch; a plain hummingbird
investigates each

tkpwhras
pwauls
hapbg

thraoe tkpwhras pwauls hapbg
fr- a porpblg; a phraeupb huplgpweurd
sregts aoefp

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cat
in
shade

a tree droops, depressed
by lack of water; a cat
in shade waits for mice

kat
tph
shaeud

a traoe tkraops, dprefd
pweu hrabg of waurt; a kat
tph shaeud waeuts tpor phao*eus

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at
heart

two lovebirds cuddle
lovingly at heart of palm
curbside; I wonder

at
haert

two lufpweurdz kulgts
hrufghreu at haert of paupl
kurbstaoeud; eu worpbd

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sun
butts
hot

afternoon's sun butts
hot, presses, oppresses, vents
my pores, drinks from them

supb
pwuts
hot

afrpbz supb pwuts
hot, prefs, oeprefs, srepbts
pheu poerps, tkreufrpbs tpr- thepl

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not
forked

two swallows I spy
in fancy flight; not forked-tails,
mind you, but swallows

tphot
tpoerbgd

two swaubls eu spaoeu
tph tpaepbs tphraoeut; tphot tpoerbgd-taeuls,
phaoeupbd u, pwu swaubls

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his
head
bent
under

cat, black-and-gray, head
bent under white rail, stares;
he scoots on the run

heus
haed
pwepbt
urpbd

kat, pwhrabg-skp-tkpwraeu, haed
pwepbt urpbd whaoeut raeul, staers;
e skaots ot rupb

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to taste
the air

a fat carp dimples
the top of a tranquil pool
for to taste the air

to taeufpt
-t aeur

a tpat karp tkeufpls
-t top of a trankweul paol
tpor to taeufpt -t aeur

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what
will
be

a pup ravages
his toy secure in the knowledge
it will be replaced

wa
hr-
b

a pup rafeupblgs
heus toeu skaour tph-t -pblg
t- hr-b tphraeufd

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I
go
sad

I leave today, and
preparations distract me
no end; I go sad

eu
tkpwoe
sad

eu hraoef tka, skp-
prepgss stkrabgt phe
tpho epbd; eu tkpwoe sad

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Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Chuck …. what can I say

Chuck .... what can I say granted the freedom to write these , you write with your heart and your mind goes on the journey ,And i go sad that was all there was ... you leave me speachless most times , tonight I make an effort to put into words how your poems affect me ... Love Jayne x x
B

barbsdad2003

16 years 10 months ago

Jayne ...

my clock is short nearing plane time. I'll get to your Nights Dreaming probably sometime in the next couple days. Thank you for your comment here. I especially like the framing and profound sentiment of "you write with your heart and your mind goes on the journey." I think it worth a haiku/senryu in its own right. I'll think on that. Although I'll probably have to wait, if I find the moment sometime this morning (or later), I want to mention something at your Nights Dreaming. Although it's quite improved now from your original, there's still a bit of raggedness that I think ought to be addressed. More later. Love right back, Chuck
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Chuck

I see that you have been a very busy boy. I always admire those who can write haiku and senryu. There is an order and exactness about them contained in three lines. You do it well. Soon you will be home again and your family and Buster will be so glad to see you! Have a safe flight! Hugs, Cat