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Jun 15, 2009
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Funny Drunk Stuff
Frolicking amongst the roses
in New Farm park
with jugs of Black Velvet
the stiletto heels sinking
falling all over
and the glasses clinking
laughing till we burst
we will never forget the farce
but our heads will
feel the worst
from too many Black Velvets
we have not a care
this time is for funny drunk stuff
chasing each other around
shoes flung in the air
skirts billowing in a suddenly bluster
someone fell over, laughing
laughing till the tears fall
crying with laughter
pouring and missing the glass
don't spill the black gold
I'll lick it off the grass
in New Farm park
with jugs of Black Velvet
the stiletto heels sinking
falling all over
and the glasses clinking
laughing till we burst
we will never forget the farce
but our heads will
feel the worst
from too many Black Velvets
we have not a care
this time is for funny drunk stuff
chasing each other around
shoes flung in the air
skirts billowing in a suddenly bluster
someone fell over, laughing
laughing till the tears fall
crying with laughter
pouring and missing the glass
don't spill the black gold
I'll lick it off the grass
Comments
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
Hello
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
Thankyou,
weirdelf
16 years 10 months ago
LOL, I enjoyed it like I was
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
Jess,
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
A good fun romp in the swigging match of party time,