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Funny Drunk Stuff

Frolicking amongst the roses
in New Farm park
with jugs of Black Velvet
the stiletto heels sinking
falling all over
and the glasses clinking
laughing till we burst
we will never forget the farce
but our heads will
feel the worst
from too many Black Velvets
we have not a care
this time is for funny drunk stuff
chasing each other around
shoes flung in the air
skirts billowing in a suddenly bluster
someone fell over,  laughing
laughing till the tears fall
crying with laughter
pouring and missing the glass
don't spill the black gold
I'll lick it off the grass

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Hello

It sounds like quite a party, sorry I missed being there! Loved the upbeat imagery. The pacing of the poem seemed very natural to the situation, it carried well. Always, Cat
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 10 months ago

LOL, I enjoyed it like I was

LOL, I enjoyed it like I was there! I was sure there was going to be a rhyme there with "falling on your arse" though. cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 10 months ago

Jess,

you are an absolute treasure wanting to be discovered every second!! I think 'falling on your arse' will turn up in part two! That will be a doosy so watch out for that one! Thanks for the comment. lol :)fleur
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

A good fun romp in the swigging match of party time,

Ann of Norway A good fun romp in the swigging match of party time, I suppose its fun as I have never been drunk, only once a little tipsy. I always like to be in command of myself, sadly perhaps missed that gay abandon achieved by such behaviour. Oh wow I sound so good, I'm not its just that to laugh and dance with total abandon I didn't need any seductive drinks I was already with-it; an just like the poetry always a different dance, inspired by the music, which is always there when I write poetry, or prose too. Love Ann