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Crabby

When wrinkles start appearing
Getting deeper by the day
With liver spots accruing
And the hair is going grey
The early morning aches and pains
A stomach growing flabby
The crows feet and the flatulence
No wonder you feel crabby

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

14 years 1 month ago

Hello,

LOL! Funny but true. Nicely rhymed.

always, Cat

wesley snow

wesley snow

14 years 1 month ago

Hey.

This is simple, profound and marvelously framed. I do love it. wesley