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Sep 26, 2011
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Crabby
When wrinkles start appearing
Getting deeper by the day
With liver spots accruing
And the hair is going grey
The early morning aches and pains
A stomach growing flabby
The crows feet and the flatulence
No wonder you feel crabby
— shazbat, Sep 26, 2011
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Candlewitch
14 years 10 months ago
Hello,
LOL! Funny but true. Nicely rhymed.
always, Cat
wesley snow
14 years 10 months ago
Hey.
This is simple, profound and marvelously framed. I do love it. wesley
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