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Hidden meanings from Dawning Daytrip
Crisp,
Damp, {Life before Neopoet}
A cool Silent suspense,
holding a mystery of anticipation. { then First Discovering Neopoet.}
Eloquence renewed,
dancing an age old welcome. { Reintroducing my self to my poetry. And the poet here welcomed me}
Calling with a tender kiss of promise. {Showing myself I had some talent which called me to try harder.}
Each dawn a daily encore,
overflowing from a wellspring of color. {Each day new comments to respond to everyday and with a overflowing
wellspring of new and colorful friends.}
Prayer's painted with-in every moment. {Always new stuff to read and learn written in indiviual's souls}
Savage souls written in ancient patterns. {All here at Neopoet are Talented soulful poets who write poetry, a true ancient
pattern}
Feeling,
Learning,
each awakening shade. {discovering learning sharing caring from every one, it's all here.}
Birthing a regal purple passage,
threaded by Lavender and lilac ribbon's.
(Regal it self means purple, and a Purple passage also known as a purple patch definition is
Main Entry: purple passage
Function: noun
Etymology: translation of Latin pannus purpureus purple patch; from the traditional splendor of purple cloth as contrasted with plainer materials
1 : a passage conspicuous for brilliance or effectiveness in a work that is dull, commonplace, or uninspired
2 chiefly British : a piece of obtrusively ornate writing -- called also purple patch
I also used a structure on this and all similar stanza 2nd lines, one color decritive first line, 2 color and referancing flora or fauna
Rough rough translation,
"Entering a purple passage conspicuous for brilliance or effectiveness in a work that is dull, commonplace, or uninspired
piece of obtrusively ornate writing "
Ripening like a sweet succulent Plum,
cleansing the pitch of night with Apollo's light.
{Plums, Yummy fruit yes, but also anoter shade of purple, and The second line flowed so nice as a rhyme, which I was avoiding, But I had to keep it).
(yes it meant pitch of dark but also night, and
4 a (1) : to cause to be at a particular level or of a particular quality
4 a : the relative level, intensity, or extent of some quality or state <tensions rose to a feverish pitch>
Main Entry: Apol·lo
Function: noun
Pronunciation: &-'pä-(")lO
Etymology: Latin Apollin-, Apollo, from Greek ApollOn
: the Greek and Roman god of sunlight, prophecy, music, and poetry
Rough rough translation.
"Devolping like a sweet Plum/color/Fruit/ washing the pitch/sticky/shade dark/bad away with sunlight, prophecy, music, and poetry)
An ever evolving Blood Mandarin prose,
punctuated delicately with Apricot and Marigold.
{So this stanza each color is a fruit,
Blood mandarin is a fruit,
and Madarin prose definitions is
Main Entry: 2mandarin
Function: adjective
1 : of, relating to, or typical of a mandarin
2 : marked by polished ornate complexity of language <mandarin prose>
rough translation, and a peek in to my insanity.
"Ever evolving (fruit, blood mandarin, color, Mandarin orange and Mandarin prose, means marked by polished ornate complexity of language" )
The Celestial waves of Aqua heralding,
Cerulean and Azure Blessings over the horizon.
(Celetial waves of Aqua, Aqua means water, also a color in the dawn and represent Waves which take that image to the sky. Cerlean is a color and means dark blue of a clear sky, and Azure is the light blue of a clear sky, and a preacious stone}.
Every morning suggesting a golden purpose. {Color and greater meaning in each and every day.}
Each Dawning offering inspiration,
illuminating a fresh and new Day trip.
My screen name of coarse. And why its part of me and means so much. My greatest inspration is the dawn and happens to be my middle name as well. Yes I may be loopy, but I love being me. Julie
D.D.
4/11/2009
Damp, {Life before Neopoet}
A cool Silent suspense,
holding a mystery of anticipation. { then First Discovering Neopoet.}
Eloquence renewed,
dancing an age old welcome. { Reintroducing my self to my poetry. And the poet here welcomed me}
Calling with a tender kiss of promise. {Showing myself I had some talent which called me to try harder.}
Each dawn a daily encore,
overflowing from a wellspring of color. {Each day new comments to respond to everyday and with a overflowing
wellspring of new and colorful friends.}
Prayer's painted with-in every moment. {Always new stuff to read and learn written in indiviual's souls}
Savage souls written in ancient patterns. {All here at Neopoet are Talented soulful poets who write poetry, a true ancient
pattern}
Feeling,
Learning,
each awakening shade. {discovering learning sharing caring from every one, it's all here.}
Birthing a regal purple passage,
threaded by Lavender and lilac ribbon's.
(Regal it self means purple, and a Purple passage also known as a purple patch definition is
Main Entry: purple passage
Function: noun
Etymology: translation of Latin pannus purpureus purple patch; from the traditional splendor of purple cloth as contrasted with plainer materials
1 : a passage conspicuous for brilliance or effectiveness in a work that is dull, commonplace, or uninspired
2 chiefly British : a piece of obtrusively ornate writing -- called also purple patch
I also used a structure on this and all similar stanza 2nd lines, one color decritive first line, 2 color and referancing flora or fauna
Rough rough translation,
"Entering a purple passage conspicuous for brilliance or effectiveness in a work that is dull, commonplace, or uninspired
piece of obtrusively ornate writing "
Ripening like a sweet succulent Plum,
cleansing the pitch of night with Apollo's light.
{Plums, Yummy fruit yes, but also anoter shade of purple, and The second line flowed so nice as a rhyme, which I was avoiding, But I had to keep it).
(yes it meant pitch of dark but also night, and
4 a (1) : to cause to be at a particular level or of a particular quality
4 a : the relative level, intensity, or extent of some quality or state <tensions rose to a feverish pitch>
Main Entry: Apol·lo
Function: noun
Pronunciation: &-'pä-(")lO
Etymology: Latin Apollin-, Apollo, from Greek ApollOn
: the Greek and Roman god of sunlight, prophecy, music, and poetry
Rough rough translation.
"Devolping like a sweet Plum/color/Fruit/ washing the pitch/sticky/shade dark/bad away with sunlight, prophecy, music, and poetry)
An ever evolving Blood Mandarin prose,
punctuated delicately with Apricot and Marigold.
{So this stanza each color is a fruit,
Blood mandarin is a fruit,
and Madarin prose definitions is
Main Entry: 2mandarin
Function: adjective
1 : of, relating to, or typical of a mandarin
2 : marked by polished ornate complexity of language <mandarin prose>
rough translation, and a peek in to my insanity.
"Ever evolving (fruit, blood mandarin, color, Mandarin orange and Mandarin prose, means marked by polished ornate complexity of language" )
The Celestial waves of Aqua heralding,
Cerulean and Azure Blessings over the horizon.
(Celetial waves of Aqua, Aqua means water, also a color in the dawn and represent Waves which take that image to the sky. Cerlean is a color and means dark blue of a clear sky, and Azure is the light blue of a clear sky, and a preacious stone}.
Every morning suggesting a golden purpose. {Color and greater meaning in each and every day.}
Each Dawning offering inspiration,
illuminating a fresh and new Day trip.
My screen name of coarse. And why its part of me and means so much. My greatest inspration is the dawn and happens to be my middle name as well. Yes I may be loopy, but I love being me. Julie
D.D.
4/11/2009