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A NEW POEM FOR THE DISCUSSION OF MEMBERS
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Am I a man?
Am I a man? to live here
With all nobles and saints of this soil
Am I a noble to say a word to others?
Where angels and fairies are moving here and there
He is there with a gentle smile and
He is calling me to near his feet
Do I deserve to his mercy and love
Did I wipe anyone’s tears? and
Did I hear anyone’s cries?
Did I share anyone’s pains?
To Enjoy in His kingdom as pure
I was a sinner and I was impure
I lived as a selfish rogue lifelong
How He takes me as His son?
Oh I spelt His name once as fun
That has brought me here as his son.
This poem hasbeen posted here for the discussion of the member poets
Regarding it's merrits and demerrits
By
Saktheee S.Ravichandran India