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I See

I see

Fields of Light

Swirling atomic

Splendor

And

I

One tiny

Point

Of energy

Can perceive

This is

The projection

Of Thee

Thou

Who creates

Beyond

Time

And

Space

Directing

In infinite

Grace

 

And

I

Am part

Of

Infinity

 

My only

Hold

Is

Consciousness

That

I can

Manifest

 

But in

My longing

To be free

I question

What

Thou

Requests of

Me



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Ink Dragon

17 years 1 month ago

Hi Kristeta,

what a great philosohical piece! I think I know the feeling, the strife you are describing here. I tried to ask a similar question when I wrote "Creation" (the original freeform version, not the posted sonnet). Yours, ~Nina