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Sep 16, 2011
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An Intermittent Rule of Thumbs
Please try and sever all your stupid ties
because she's so not into, you!
A heart that's died,
can't be denied,
it might be that it's your "cue"!
~
It's never going to get easier
so keep your cards close to the vest.
Put away that cross,
and start hitting the "sauce",
you can't beat 'em, so join the rest!
— docmaverick, Sep 16, 2011
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: It was a 10 line, "nonsense" contest. This poem received an honorable mention.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
docmaverick
14 years 6 months ago
Thanx, Ian....
...just me, setting the "bar" a little lower with each write.
doc.
Kailashana2
14 years 6 months ago
The deck is stacked.
The deck is stacked.
Nonsense you say?
I wonder what the winning poem was if your's was honorable mention.
~A
docmaverick
14 years 6 months ago
Ah yes, dear ~A....
...it's the wonder of poetry that keeps us poets....guessing. Not sure what poem won, but I'll look that up.
doc.
scribbler
14 years 6 months ago
Hey Doc
Keep such "NONSENSE " coming lol............stan