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Feb 12, 2009
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Surrender
This wall again has found me
And has surrounded my encampment,
Its turrets silently screaming
Much more effectively than a human voice.
I am trapped…..
For there is no gate
From which to make my escape,
And I petition the walls and towers
To save me from this silence,
But the continual refusal
Causes pride to cease my words.
Here in my solitude
The red bird flies down to greet me,
Cheerfully singing his songs;
Yet, he seems dismayed at my words,
Confused with lack of understanding,
For my sorrow is too heavy for his wings to bear.
While Hope wilts
Under the weight of my expectations,
And it appears
That I will have to speak my words
To an uncaring sky.
— Blue_Halcyon, Feb 12, 2009
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