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clouds

blue mountains and rose petals
fall to earth
and the earth swallows everything
but love

love is all there is
but for the magnitude of reflection,
an ocean we leave behind
beside our mortal coil

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4mUmdR69nbM This Mortal Coil ~ Cocteau Twins

— Kailashana2, Sep 08, 2011

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Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”. , I'm still writing.....

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14 years 6 months ago

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