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Immediately
My good friend in Scotland sent me " A book of nonsense" by Mervyn Peake. I reply:-
I must respond immediately
to that which you have sent to me
so absolute, delectable,
the table with the dinnerel
set out to 'muse ones tinklings
and if you will excuse
the nonsenseicle prehensible
meramblings of my fuse,
you knew that I could use.
Its catching and matching
the style of sounds enchanting
from spheres of mind
how very kind
of you to think
that I could sink
into the words
of nonsense prose
and stop the drip upon my nose
for laughing at my too short toes.
I find that I cannot stop. Oh! What
can save me from this noodlespot?
The rhythm interposing
my very brain gallops around
on camels rounded humped background
in trousers tight, I burn the light
and out of sight the brain
'tis as was is in such a tizz
like drizzle in the rain.
Insane!
Thank you and takk you are so good to think of me in April,
when I shall send my love to you the thousandth time in May.
Ann.
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