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Dec 01, 2008
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Tears
Tears
She was crying as a child
inthe end of one evening
It was a nice park
we only the couples there
Her tears changed me
to cancelmy program of that day
yes such a powerful weapon she had
That tears bonded me forever with her
An angel with two beautiful eyes
asked me to take her to out
As her mother
it cried with tears to fulfil her wish
I became mad and lost my heart
took her out to wipe her tears
It laughed and smiled
Yes I felt
I have got rebirth to this world
She was crying as a child
inthe end of one evening
It was a nice park
we only the couples there
Her tears changed me
to cancelmy program of that day
yes such a powerful weapon she had
That tears bonded me forever with her
An angel with two beautiful eyes
asked me to take her to out
As her mother
it cried with tears to fulfil her wish
I became mad and lost my heart
took her out to wipe her tears
It laughed and smiled
Yes I felt
I have got rebirth to this world
— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 01, 2008
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