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Nov 25, 2008
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Lense
Stay close to me love
And I’ll hold your hand
Let me clear dark clouds
And replace them with sunlight
Look at us, through the lenses of your eyes
Does it contain, all of your emotion
Just come back, and take another look at me
I just can’t be all I should be
I will keep your eyes alive
Open with me tonight
Show you all the light you need to see
And hold your head up high
I just can’t be all I should be
You fall into love; you’ll fall for such love
You fall into love; you’ll fall for such love
You fall into love; you’ll fall for such love
You fall into love; you’ll fall for such love
Look at us, through the lenses of your eyes
Does it contain, all of your emotion
Just come back, and take another look at me
I just can’t be all I should be
— washing tears, Nov 25, 2008
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