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Jun 20, 2008
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Nonet - self-finding
His face trapped in the ocean’s mirror
trembles rapidly; heart is stoned,
in the bottom filled with sand!
Behind, the uttered trees
extend their branches,
like the terror
in the souls
he died
for...
trembles rapidly; heart is stoned,
in the bottom filled with sand!
Behind, the uttered trees
extend their branches,
like the terror
in the souls
he died
for...
Comments
RSScheerer
17 years 10 months ago
Excellent, Marius!
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you very much Ronda
Janice Pearce
17 years 10 months ago
Marius
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
thank you!
rider68
17 years 10 months ago
Rather than pass by
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you Peter
sweetness
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Marius...
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
Danke
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Marius...
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you Richard
Calliope
17 years 10 months ago
Stunning Write,Marius
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you...
Poetic Fluffer
17 years 10 months ago
Great piece
weirdelf
17 years 10 months ago
You are a master wordcrafter,
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
thanks Jess
infinite_dwarf
17 years 10 months ago
Marius
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Marius
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
thank you