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smooth

the soft gun of rain--

here are the belching engines,
 
and rusted teargas

of car exhaust.  a child

waving from a tinted window

small as the drops

lining his reflection.

at the end are scented hours--

the young perfume of mourning,

at my funeral in the early AM.  you

smell of incense and hickory, a 

delight  to watch from

cozy padding.  don't expect too much of

me: it's your turn to put on a performance

mine is over.

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years ago

I got a distinct feeling of

I got a distinct feeling of tenderness at the bottom of this well of retrospect, despite the car exhaust and belching machines. It was like being in attendance at ones own funeral. Comforting in a way. Very pensive. I liked it very much. Always, Cat
Kailashana

Kailashana

18 years ago

Thank you. Great Poem! The

Thank you. Great Poem! The hard, black rain is unsentimental. We live here... between the drops... overflowing with too much tenderness, soft with words.. ~a And thank you for your inspiration...it doesn't happen all the time. ;-)