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Apr 29, 2008
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smooth
the soft gun of rain--
here are the belching engines,
and rusted teargas
of car exhaust. a child
waving from a tinted window
small as the drops
lining his reflection.
at the end are scented hours--
the young perfume of mourning,
at my funeral in the early AM. you
smell of incense and hickory, a
delight to watch from
cozy padding. don't expect too much of
me: it's your turn to put on a performance
mine is over.
here are the belching engines,
and rusted teargas
of car exhaust. a child
waving from a tinted window
small as the drops
lining his reflection.
at the end are scented hours--
the young perfume of mourning,
at my funeral in the early AM. you
smell of incense and hickory, a
delight to watch from
cozy padding. don't expect too much of
me: it's your turn to put on a performance
mine is over.
Comments
Candlewitch
18 years ago
I got a distinct feeling of
Kailashana
18 years ago
Thank you. Great Poem! The
Synchro
17 years 10 months ago
fine work...but the title needs changing