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chills

moving through

a whistling cascade

of wet leaves,

the teasing wind robs his

legs of security

under grasping

branches missing

only rope. thinking

in sharp origami,

pieces of a shattered

mirror on copper pavement

littered with pipes

that may have

been his own

rake the shattered

kaleidoscope in a

steaming brain

of his one year old son,

the gentle pressure

of questioning hands—

a wife with eyes ringed

in loving exhaustion,

sleeping on a pulpy

mattress discolored

from burns, and the man

with silver caps for

teeth smiling just like

a biting clock. as a car

arrives at the next light

there will be no more

excuses. later, after

the groceries are

spilled and a headline

is made, a young

man will save it in a

scrapbook in his dorm

knowing his father

cared about only one thing.


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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 1 month ago

Rushing nightmare

I think you succeeded in your approach. This reminds me of a few disjointed dreams I've had and a good many nightmares. There is always that odd in-between moment of sleep and wake when you have to re-adjust your mind. There are a few things to consider here. I want to read it a few more times. It's good to see you posting something new! Ronda
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 1 month ago

As I read I get the unsettled

tossing and turning from the verses as well as the formate structure a routine interupted,then reflected upon for posterity,an attempt to disassociate through distraction. Outside your previous postings this stands out to me. In ink, Dabbler
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

With all that has already

With all that has already been said by Ronda and Dabbler, let me add that the ending hits hard, like a brick wall. Good poem. Always, Cat